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指南者留學(xué) 董春曉
2023年12月28日
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<p>2022年11月,Z學(xué)生在于我們簽約前就已經(jīng)積累了豐富的經(jīng)歷,包括參加過互聯(lián)網(wǎng)+、大創(chuàng)等各類市級校級項(xiàng)目,并且也有意識地注重實(shí)習(xí)的積累,早在大一和大二期間已經(jīng)完成了兩段實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)歷,可以看出她對于留學(xué)的決心和毅力。</p>
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<h1><br /><span style="color: #ffffff;"><strong>選校定位:腳踏實(shí)地</strong></span></h1>
<p><br />在簽約后,Z同學(xué)也早早明確了意向申請的專業(yè)方向,在我們規(guī)劃師專業(yè)的指導(dǎo)下,圍繞意向方向食品營養(yǎng)學(xué)制定了一系列背景的規(guī)劃與提升安排,進(jìn)一步提升自己的軟硬件背景。在寒假期間,她積極參加了一段農(nóng)科院的實(shí)習(xí),并主動尋找導(dǎo)師從事本專業(yè)食品相關(guān)的項(xiàng)目研究和論文撰寫,以增加自己的申請競爭力,這種有意識的努力加上前期一步一個腳印的踏實(shí)積累,相信也為她后期在申請季取得圓滿結(jié)果奠定了堅(jiān)實(shí)的基礎(chǔ)。</p>
<p><br />到了5月,軟硬件條件基本穩(wěn)定后,我們與Z同學(xué)商定了以王愛曼華為主并輔以利茲為保底的申請組合,基于具體院校項(xiàng)目的時間及材料要求,開始按部就班地進(jìn)行文書材料的準(zhǔn)備,包括了申請簡歷的完善,推薦人的選擇,推薦信的撰寫以及個人陳述的思路溝通等。在繁忙的期末周我們也協(xié)助Z同學(xué)把重心從文書準(zhǔn)備放到期末考試的準(zhǔn)備上,Z同學(xué)也不負(fù)眾望,成功在申請開始前將均分提升到90分以上!</p>
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<h1><span style="color: #ffffff;"><strong>文書:對癥下藥</strong></span></h1>
<p><br />在個人陳述提綱的過程中,Z學(xué)生提供文書提綱的初稿后,我們與Z同學(xué)進(jìn)行了語音溝通,并針對生物和食品兩個方向展開了深入討論。由于學(xué)生經(jīng)歷豐富,我們提出可以根據(jù)不同的項(xiàng)目來匹配相應(yīng)的經(jīng)歷。</p>
<p><br />例如,Z學(xué)生參加的互聯(lián)網(wǎng)+項(xiàng)目中涉及開發(fā)室內(nèi)凈化產(chǎn)品的經(jīng)歷非常適合申請曼徹斯特大學(xué)的MSc Biotechnology and Enterprise項(xiàng)目。此外,學(xué)生作為第四作者參與的與食品相關(guān)的SCI論文研究則非常匹配倫敦大學(xué)國王學(xué)院的MSc Nutrition項(xiàng)目或利茲大學(xué)的MSc Food Science and Nutrition項(xiàng)目。</p>
<p><br />在雙方就提綱內(nèi)容和思路達(dá)成一致后,文書老師開始撰寫英文稿。這樣細(xì)致的準(zhǔn)備為學(xué)生的申請?jiān)黾恿藢I(yè)性和針對性,能夠更好地突出她在相關(guān)領(lǐng)域的經(jīng)驗(yàn)和潛力。</p>
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<h1><br /><span style="color: #ffffff;"><strong>結(jié)果:意料之外的驚喜</strong></span></h1>
<p><br />值得一提的是,由于曼大和KCL等學(xué)校要到10月后才開放申請,于是我們決定等待所有項(xiàng)目開放后一起遞交申請。在提交完所有申請后,我們再次對Z同學(xué)的整體背景進(jìn)行了全面評估,認(rèn)為她不應(yīng)該錯過沖刺G5學(xué)校的機(jī)會,于是我們在G5里搜索了兩個符合學(xué)生背景的UCL項(xiàng)目,并主動提出給她免費(fèi)加申兩個項(xiàng)目。</p>
<p><br />確定好申請項(xiàng)目以后我們馬不停蹄地協(xié)助學(xué)生準(zhǔn)備相關(guān)的文書材料。更加令人驚喜的是不到兩周的時間,UCL的錄取就來了,讓Z同學(xué)從王的女人投入了UCL的懷抱,這是對她多年來學(xué)習(xí)和努力的最好肯定,相信也是她邁向更高層次教育的里程碑。</p>
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<p>回顧這段旅程,Z同學(xué)的故事可以看出只有通過明確的目標(biāo)、充足的準(zhǔn)備和積極的配合,才能在競爭激烈的留學(xué)申請中脫穎而出,希望Z同學(xué)的經(jīng)歷能夠給正在準(zhǔn)備留學(xué)申請的同學(xué)們帶來一些啟示和鼓勵,也祝愿所有的準(zhǔn)備留學(xué)的同學(xué)們都能取得理想的結(jié)果!</p>
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