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<div class="operate-wrapper"> <div class="delete">&nbsp;</div> </div> </div> </div> </div> </div> </div> <span class="znz-autocompleter-operate"> <span class="link-operate"> <span class="toggle"> &nbsp; </span> </span> <span class="card-operate active"> <span class="edit active"> &nbsp; </span> <span class="content"> &nbsp; </span> </span> </span></div> <p>&nbsp;</p> </div> <div data-page-id="NcsBd2n8EoLZLrxO4UtcK59Jnaf" data-docx-has-block-data="true"> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-RzyHdVvkgow96Yx95h9cNDd3nqb">Z同學(xué)本科是漢語(yǔ)言文學(xué),畢業(yè)后在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)大廠從事了3 年的內(nèi)容創(chuàng)作工作。在這個(gè)過(guò)程中,她逐漸萌生了考公/考編的想法,但又不希望重復(fù)本科的學(xué)習(xí),希望通過(guò)研究生項(xiàng)目充實(shí)自己,拓寬眼界,提高競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力?;赯同學(xué)的<strong>職業(yè)規(guī)劃和學(xué)習(xí)偏好</strong>,我們幫她布局了教育和文學(xué)文化兩個(gè)方向的項(xiàng)目。在文書(shū)創(chuàng)作中,我們依據(jù)各個(gè)項(xiàng)目的招生偏好和側(cè)重點(diǎn),有針對(duì)性地選擇她的相關(guān)經(jīng)歷,以定制化的文書(shū)內(nèi)容突出她的個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)。</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-RzyHdVvkgow96Yx95h9cNDd3nqb">&nbsp;</div> <h1 class="heading-3 ace-line old-record-id-STjxdQj7vo1ME0xLpKWcdS8Vnxf"><span style="color: #ffffff;">缺少課堂教學(xué)經(jīng)歷,如何構(gòu)思教育方向的文書(shū)?</span></h1> <p>&nbsp;</p> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-SYd1dYKq1oEljZxNixRcA7JInGf">在梳理Z同學(xué)<span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #262626;">教育方向</span>的文書(shū)材料時(shí),我們發(fā)現(xiàn)盡管她有3年的工作經(jīng)驗(yàn),但沒(méi)有課堂教學(xué)的經(jīng)歷,這對(duì)于申請(qǐng)港大教育類(lèi)專(zhuān)業(yè)來(lái)說(shuō)是一個(gè)不小的挑戰(zhàn)&mdash;&mdash;如何將轉(zhuǎn)換賽道的動(dòng)機(jī)合理化并說(shuō)服招生官?經(jīng)過(guò)進(jìn)一步溝通,我們發(fā)現(xiàn)她的個(gè)人經(jīng)歷中有不少值得挖掘的地方。</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-SYd1dYKq1oEljZxNixRcA7JInGf">&nbsp;</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-KaA7dFGcIoSpNLxNfd5cWS0knPg">首先,Z同學(xué)的家庭背景(母親和爺爺均為教師)為她提供了教育環(huán)境的熏陶;</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-KaA7dFGcIoSpNLxNfd5cWS0knPg">&nbsp;</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-H31edkgAHomuESxpMV7c7RSwnnf">其次,她在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)大廠的工作期間曾做過(guò)張桂梅校長(zhǎng)的專(zhuān)訪,是一個(gè)很好的切入點(diǎn);</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-H31edkgAHomuESxpMV7c7RSwnnf">&nbsp;</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-K4oIdaPCfok1Uixa5Nvcrpn0nrb">第三,我們了解到Z同學(xué)大學(xué)期間參加了在線支教項(xiàng)目,幫扶了一位山區(qū)女孩。將這些點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來(lái),文書(shū)的框架和主線也逐漸清晰了起來(lái)。</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-K4oIdaPCfok1Uixa5Nvcrpn0nrb">&nbsp;</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-CGm9dPiJNoXigCxlbqdcWNHfnZc">開(kāi)頭段我們串聯(lián)了兩個(gè)點(diǎn),一方面點(diǎn)出她出生在教師世家的事實(shí),以及萌生成為一名教師想法的契機(jī);另一方面也巧妙地解釋了自己過(guò)去教學(xué)經(jīng)歷的空白&amp;為什么在大廠工作多年后想要學(xué)習(xí)教育學(xué)。</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-CGm9dPiJNoXigCxlbqdcWNHfnZc">&nbsp;</div> <div class="image-uploaded gallery old-record-id-F0G4d5ldIoIyjbx7EpUcwjgfnkh" data-type="image" 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