從23秋“全聚德”到24秋翻盤:揭秘夢校錄取背后的專業(yè)策略
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從23秋“全聚德”到24秋翻盤:揭秘夢校錄取背后的專業(yè)策略
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</span> </span> </span></div> <p>&nbsp;</p> </div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-YGakdBTz2oFSeVx7R6hcSZHzn5f">作為一名申請主導(dǎo)師,我有幸見證并參與到無數(shù)個學(xué)生的留學(xué)旅程中,每一次成功的案例背后,都是無數(shù)次的努力和精心規(guī)劃的結(jié)果。今天,我要分享的是L同學(xué)從23秋季&ldquo;全聚德&rdquo;到24秋季翻盤成功的故事&mdash;&mdash;一個充滿挑戰(zhàn)與堅持的留學(xué)申請之旅。</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-SgeadEzMnoNyioxvRqZchFf5n2b"><span style="color: #ffffff;">&nbsp;</span></div> <h1 class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-B8cydGqYooOas5x0wEZcqtusnnh"><span style="color: #ffffff;"><strong>初識L同學(xué):發(fā)掘潛力,量身定制策略</strong></span></h1> <p>&nbsp;</p> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-LS3OdmVp2oifXLxw5ijcatfinyb">L同學(xué),來自上海對外經(jīng)貿(mào)大學(xué),專業(yè)應(yīng)用統(tǒng)計學(xué),擁有85.93的優(yōu)異GPA和7.0的雅思成績,但23秋留學(xué)申請卻未能如愿以償。這次失敗并沒有讓她退縮,反而激發(fā)了她重新挑戰(zhàn)的勇氣。在與我們團隊接觸后,她表達了對香港的院校十分憧憬和向往,希望能夠在那里繼續(xù)深造學(xué)習(xí)。這份堅持和決心深深打動了我,于是我深入分析了她的背景并迅速制定了一個三步驟的個性化策略:強化語言能力、優(yōu)化文書、盡早提交申請,來助力她的留學(xué)夢。</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-LS3OdmVp2oifXLxw5ijcatfinyb">&nbsp;</div> <div class="image-uploaded gallery old-record-id-VMuLdzqLaonCQZxfwJecRA0pnJd" data-type="image" data-ace-gallery-json="{&quot;items&quot;:[{&quot;uuid&quot;:&quot;2bba9d72-1e94-43cf-bebd-2b2a11ba1fd0&quot;,&quot;height&quot;:336.44362292051756,&quot;width&quot;:384,&quot;currHeight&quot;:336.44362292051756,&quot;currWidth&quot;:384,&quot;natrualHeight&quot;:948,&quot;natrualWidth&quot;:1082,&quot;pluginName&quot;:&quot;imageUpload&quot;,&quot;scale&quot;:0.35489833641404805,&quot;src&quot;:&quot;https%3A%2F%2Finternal-api-drive-stream.feishu.cn%2Fspace%2Fapi%2Fbox%2Fstream%2Fdownload%2Fpreview%2FRXjWbaz2eouufBxUCpJcmDYVn7c%2F%3Fpreview_type%3D16&quot;,&quot;file_token&quot;:&quot;RXjWbaz2eouufBxUCpJcmDYVn7c&quot;,&quot;image_type&quot;:&quot;image/png&quot;,&quot;size&quot;:306315,&quot;comments&quot;:[]}]}"><img style="display: block; 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margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;" src="https://info.compassedu.hk/sucai/content/1714899254212/1714899254212.jpg" width="506" height="454" /></div> <h2 class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-F6FCdDKXQo0ayaxbpfncW2aSnxd">&nbsp;</h2> <h2 class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-F6FCdDKXQo0ayaxbpfncW2aSnxd"><span style="color: #1890ff;"><strong>策略二:文書的深度優(yōu)化</strong></span></h2> <p>&nbsp;</p> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-T8oldMuvfoBwyMxJ3TdcwPYgnJe">在留學(xué)申請過程中,優(yōu)秀的文書不僅是介紹申請者學(xué)術(shù)背景、個人經(jīng)歷的材料,,更是展現(xiàn)申請者個性、思維方式和未來潛力的窗口。因此,我首先分析了L同學(xué)上個申請季的文書問題,并和其就文書材料進行溝通、優(yōu)化和完善,使得 L 同學(xué)的實習(xí)經(jīng)歷和個人特質(zhì)更加突出。</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-T8oldMuvfoBwyMxJ3TdcwPYgnJe">&nbsp;</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-KxGHdZkmNoXnqsxzQbhcP2wHnne">在cv方面,我不僅增加了實習(xí)經(jīng)歷的描述,還細化了在每個實習(xí)中具體承擔(dān)的項目任務(wù),如何運用數(shù)據(jù)分析工具解決實際問題,并通過突出數(shù)據(jù)分析工具的應(yīng)用、參與數(shù)據(jù)分析項目并設(shè)計關(guān)鍵業(yè)務(wù)指標,展示了L同學(xué)在數(shù)據(jù)科學(xué)領(lǐng)域的實際技能和項目經(jīng)驗。</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-KxGHdZkmNoXnqsxzQbhcP2wHnne">&nbsp;</div> <div class="image-uploaded gallery old-record-id-S1zudSRtPo7kTVxj6oLc7OHmnQd" data-type="image" data-ace-gallery-json="{&quot;items&quot;:[{&quot;uuid&quot;:&quot;7f70339c-c0fa-41e0-a8dc-d74bae337ece&quot;,&quot;height&quot;:1164,&quot;width&quot;:2642,&quot;currHeight&quot;:1164,&quot;currWidth&quot;:2642,&quot;natrualHeight&quot;:1164,&quot;natrualWidth&quot;:2642,&quot;pluginName&quot;:&quot;imageUpload&quot;,&quot;scale&quot;:1,&quot;src&quot;:&quot;https%3A%2F%2Finternal-api-drive-stream.feishu.cn%2Fspace%2Fapi%2Fbox%2Fstream%2Fdownload%2Fpreview%2FSt7zbrJT0o8vq4x2gcHcOwOWnWe%2F%3Fpreview_type%3D16&quot;,&quot;file_token&quot;:&quot;St7zbrJT0o8vq4x2gcHcOwOWnWe&quot;,&quot;image_type&quot;:&quot;image/jpeg&quot;,&quot;size&quot;:889245,&quot;comments&quot;:[]}]}"><img style="display: block; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;" src="https://info.compassedu.hk/sucai/content/1714899268243/1714899268243.jpg" width="570" height="244" data-znz-article-border="1" /></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-Rm4zdxFkUoLfrKxKMuwcOjmrnGh">&nbsp;</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-XesSdhksDoeojCx8PcoctciCnhb">在ps方面,我特別注重挖掘?qū)W生個性化內(nèi)容體現(xiàn)。比如原稿的興趣起源板塊,缺乏具體的項目經(jīng)歷和與目標學(xué)校的相關(guān)性,以及對個人特質(zhì)和獨特經(jīng)歷的展示。在優(yōu)化后,我突出了L同學(xué)的在本科階段的學(xué)術(shù)背景和實踐經(jīng)歷,特別是通過參加全國大學(xué)生市場調(diào)查分析大賽的經(jīng)歷,展示了其在統(tǒng)計學(xué)和數(shù)據(jù)分析領(lǐng)域的專業(yè)能力和實踐經(jīng)驗。同時,強調(diào)了對數(shù)據(jù)科學(xué)的熱情和對目標學(xué)校的選擇理由,增強了個人陳述的說服力和針對性。</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-XesSdhksDoeojCx8PcoctciCnhb">&nbsp;</div> <div class="image-uploaded gallery old-record-id-CXn7dF7twoUUXIxSIsdcqU9wnte" data-type="image" data-ace-gallery-json="{&quot;items&quot;:[{&quot;uuid&quot;:&quot;3abc439d-c1f9-4bca-899a-a1a16c363533&quot;,&quot;height&quot;:456.7574468085106,&quot;width&quot;:713.9999999999999,&quot;currHeight&quot;:456.7574468085106,&quot;currWidth&quot;:713.9999999999999,&quot;natrualHeight&quot;:902,&quot;natrualWidth&quot;:1410,&quot;pluginName&quot;:&quot;imageUpload&quot;,&quot;scale&quot;:0.5063829787234042,&quot;src&quot;:&quot;https%3A%2F%2Finternal-api-drive-stream.feishu.cn%2Fspace%2Fapi%2Fbox%2Fstream%2Fdownload%2Fpreview%2FJ9P9bWtkmoFSqIxoY6oc5IdnnTd%2F%3Fpreview_type%3D16&quot;,&quot;file_token&quot;:&quot;J9P9bWtkmoFSqIxoY6oc5IdnnTd&quot;,&quot;image_type&quot;:&quot;image/png&quot;,&quot;size&quot;:505032,&quot;comments&quot;:[]}]}"><img style="display: block; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;" src="https://info.compassedu.hk/sucai/content/1714899283918/1714899283918.png" width="572" height="361" data-znz-article-border="1" /></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-FcPudGwSPoXc9qxBAI4cSCdfnsb">&nbsp;</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-FcPudGwSPoXc9qxBAI4cSCdfnsb">此外,ps中的經(jīng)歷適配度也同樣重要,原ps中提到的&ldquo;山西省數(shù)字普惠金融促進鄉(xiāng)村振興研究&rdquo;雖然是一項有價值的經(jīng)歷,但對于數(shù)據(jù)科學(xué)/數(shù)學(xué)方向的研究生申請來說,其直接相關(guān)性和技術(shù)深度可能不夠突出。因此我挑選了她的畢業(yè)設(shè)計和參與美國大學(xué)生數(shù)學(xué)建模比賽(MCM)這兩項經(jīng)歷,這兩段經(jīng)歷更直接地展現(xiàn)了L同學(xué)對復(fù)雜數(shù)據(jù)分析工具和模型的掌握,以及她在應(yīng)用這些工具解決實際問題方面的能力。</div> <div class="image-uploaded gallery old-record-id-JWl0d4Vl8o6CuHxOArlcynegnPc" style="text-align: left;" data-type="image" data-ace-gallery-json="{&quot;items&quot;:[{&quot;uuid&quot;:&quot;f67789cb-91c8-4545-9165-3318d61acbc5&quot;,&quot;height&quot;:375.4782608695652,&quot;width&quot;:508,&quot;currHeight&quot;:375.4782608695652,&quot;currWidth&quot;:508,&quot;natrualHeight&quot;:1054,&quot;natrualWidth&quot;:1426,&quot;pluginName&quot;:&quot;imageUpload&quot;,&quot;scale&quot;:0.35624123422159887,&quot;src&quot;:&quot;https%3A%2F%2Finternal-api-drive-stream.feishu.cn%2Fspace%2Fapi%2Fbox%2Fstream%2Fdownload%2Fpreview%2FC38YbjqkeoaTsBxp5Uucxduqnuc%2F%3Fpreview_type%3D16&quot;,&quot;file_token&quot;:&quot;C38YbjqkeoaTsBxp5Uucxduqnuc&quot;,&quot;image_type&quot;:&quot;image/png&quot;,&quot;size&quot;:403271,&quot;comments&quot;:[]}]}">&nbsp;</div> <div class="image-uploaded gallery old-record-id-JWl0d4Vl8o6CuHxOArlcynegnPc" data-type="image" data-ace-gallery-json="{&quot;items&quot;:[{&quot;uuid&quot;:&quot;f67789cb-91c8-4545-9165-3318d61acbc5&quot;,&quot;height&quot;:375.4782608695652,&quot;width&quot;:508,&quot;currHeight&quot;:375.4782608695652,&quot;currWidth&quot;:508,&quot;natrualHeight&quot;:1054,&quot;natrualWidth&quot;:1426,&quot;pluginName&quot;:&quot;imageUpload&quot;,&quot;scale&quot;:0.35624123422159887,&quot;src&quot;:&quot;https%3A%2F%2Finternal-api-drive-stream.feishu.cn%2Fspace%2Fapi%2Fbox%2Fstream%2Fdownload%2Fpreview%2FC38YbjqkeoaTsBxp5Uucxduqnuc%2F%3Fpreview_type%3D16&quot;,&quot;file_token&quot;:&quot;C38YbjqkeoaTsBxp5Uucxduqnuc&quot;,&quot;image_type&quot;:&quot;image/png&quot;,&quot;size&quot;:403271,&quot;comments&quot;:[]}]}"><img style="display: block; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;" src="https://info.compassedu.hk/sucai/content/1714899312901/1714899312901.png" width="585" height="431" data-znz-article-border="1" /></div> <div class="image-uploaded gallery old-record-id-JWl0d4Vl8o6CuHxOArlcynegnPc" style="text-align: left;" data-type="image" data-ace-gallery-json="{&quot;items&quot;:[{&quot;uuid&quot;:&quot;f67789cb-91c8-4545-9165-3318d61acbc5&quot;,&quot;height&quot;:375.4782608695652,&quot;width&quot;:508,&quot;currHeight&quot;:375.4782608695652,&quot;currWidth&quot;:508,&quot;natrualHeight&quot;:1054,&quot;natrualWidth&quot;:1426,&quot;pluginName&quot;:&quot;imageUpload&quot;,&quot;scale&quot;:0.35624123422159887,&quot;src&quot;:&quot;https%3A%2F%2Finternal-api-drive-stream.feishu.cn%2Fspace%2Fapi%2Fbox%2Fstream%2Fdownload%2Fpreview%2FC38YbjqkeoaTsBxp5Uucxduqnuc%2F%3Fpreview_type%3D16&quot;,&quot;file_token&quot;:&quot;C38YbjqkeoaTsBxp5Uucxduqnuc&quot;,&quot;image_type&quot;:&quot;image/png&quot;,&quot;size&quot;:403271,&quot;comments&quot;:[]}]}">&nbsp;</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-RbL0dVNebojouWxgtEhcmSPonPh">通過一系列精心策劃的步驟,包括對文書的深度分析、個性化優(yōu)化,以及根據(jù)反饋進行的持續(xù)潤色和補充,我們不僅確保了L同學(xué)的申請材料精準地展現(xiàn)了她的個人優(yōu)勢和學(xué)術(shù)潛力,更重要的是,這一過程中我們與L同學(xué)建立了密切的合作關(guān)系,L同學(xué)對于經(jīng)過我們團隊精心打磨的文書給予了極高的評價。</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-RbL0dVNebojouWxgtEhcmSPonPh">&nbsp;</div> <div class="image-uploaded gallery old-record-id-MUfad72SfoVCkbx8U7mcCOqWnYb" style="text-align: left;" data-type="image" data-ace-gallery-json="{&quot;items&quot;:[{&quot;uuid&quot;:&quot;307a47b3-4e19-4fe7-98b2-3b0ad00b2b25&quot;,&quot;height&quot;:259.37525354969574,&quot;width&quot;:444,&quot;currHeight&quot;:259.37525354969574,&quot;currWidth&quot;:444,&quot;natrualHeight&quot;:576,&quot;natrualWidth&quot;:986,&quot;pluginName&quot;:&quot;imageUpload&quot;,&quot;scale&quot;:0.45030425963488846,&quot;src&quot;:&quot;https%3A%2F%2Finternal-api-drive-stream.feishu.cn%2Fspace%2Fapi%2Fbox%2Fstream%2Fdownload%2Fpreview%2FKWZabfyPJooRKXxCofQcm8zTncd%2F%3Fpreview_type%3D16&quot;,&quot;file_token&quot;:&quot;KWZabfyPJooRKXxCofQcm8zTncd&quot;,&quot;image_type&quot;:&quot;image/jpeg&quot;,&quot;size&quot;:111414,&quot;comments&quot;:[]}]}"><img style="display: block; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;" src="https://info.compassedu.hk/sucai/content/1714899366958/1714899366958.jpg" width="543" height="317" /></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-RvNxdjiwKoHaoOxiuORccgRPny3">&nbsp;</div> <h2 class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-GreQdibApoyWBIx1KAyczqZinPc"><span style="color: #1890ff;"><strong>策略三:把握早申優(yōu)勢</strong></span></h2> <p>&nbsp;</p> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-W0tmdcR6soz4PxxMAwncl8M1nkw">在申請進度上,我強調(diào)了早申的重要性。通過高效的文書創(chuàng)作和密切的溝通,L同學(xué)在9月初就完成了對已開放項目的申請,這一點對于她最終的成功至關(guān)重要。</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-W0tmdcR6soz4PxxMAwncl8M1nkw">&nbsp;</div> <div class="image-uploaded gallery old-record-id-HmwqdkMyFovop9xV7c3cmL5snMf" style="text-align: left;" data-type="image" data-ace-gallery-json="{&quot;items&quot;:[{&quot;uuid&quot;:&quot;4ffc4a50-4cf2-4cf6-8c88-65bd4cb9ed76&quot;,&quot;height&quot;:280.0773480662983,&quot;width&quot;:426,&quot;currHeight&quot;:280.0773480662983,&quot;currWidth&quot;:426,&quot;natrualHeight&quot;:714,&quot;natrualWidth&quot;:1086,&quot;pluginName&quot;:&quot;imageUpload&quot;,&quot;scale&quot;:0.39226519337016574,&quot;src&quot;:&quot;https%3A%2F%2Finternal-api-drive-stream.feishu.cn%2Fspace%2Fapi%2Fbox%2Fstream%2Fdownload%2Fpreview%2FLRg9beWGwoh5tgx7IdPc6trNneb%2F%3Fpreview_type%3D16&quot;,&quot;file_token&quot;:&quot;LRg9beWGwoh5tgx7IdPc6trNneb&quot;,&quot;image_type&quot;:&quot;image/jpeg&quot;,&quot;size&quot;:112272,&quot;comments&quot;:[]}]}"><img style="display: block; 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