考研失利,GPA 82如何拿下世界第一UCL建筑學(xué)雙offer?
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指南者留學(xué) 嵇玉娟
2023年07月27日
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<p style="text-align: justify;">本期要分享的Z同學(xué)是在臨近畢業(yè)的時(shí)候通過同學(xué)推薦與<a href="http://m.walkingbarcodes.com/" target="_blank" rel="noopener"><span style="text-decoration: underline;"><span style="color: #1dadff; text-decoration: underline;">指南者</span></span></a>簽約的。當(dāng)時(shí)Z同學(xué)正陷入因幾分的微小差距而落敗考研、錯(cuò)失夢(mèng)校的挫敗中,感覺非常絕望,也很迷茫。在同學(xué)的極力推薦下,Z同學(xué)抱著試一試的心態(tài)決定換個(gè)賽道繼續(xù)努力。</p>
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<h1 style="text-align: justify;"><strong><span class="h1">專業(yè)選擇</span></strong></h1>
<p style="text-align: justify;"><br />Z同學(xué)的留學(xué)意愿就是延續(xù)本科的學(xué)習(xí)方向,繼續(xù)讀城市設(shè)計(jì)或者是建筑類的專業(yè)。前期咨詢老師在跟Z同學(xué)選校定位時(shí),Z同學(xué)表明自己對(duì)地區(qū)沒有特別偏好,也表達(dá)了自身想法:<strong>“大家都只想用一個(gè)申請(qǐng)季就確定自己的碩士甚至是博士的學(xué)習(xí)方向,那為什么不利用這一次機(jī)會(huì)多嘗試呢。前期申請(qǐng)的項(xiàng)目足夠多,后面可以選擇的機(jī)會(huì)才多,留學(xué)優(yōu)于考研的其中一點(diǎn)不正是嘗試的機(jī)會(huì)有很多嗎”</strong>。了解到學(xué)生的意愿后,咨詢老師幫學(xué)生選擇了香港、新加坡、英國建筑方向的20個(gè)專業(yè)。</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">前期咨詢老師綜合考慮到學(xué)校和專業(yè)的排名,在英國地區(qū),選擇了專排全英第四的謝菲爾德大學(xué)、專排全球第一的UCL和QS 22的愛丁堡大學(xué)。在港新院校的具體專業(yè)選擇上,Z同學(xué)也聽取了咨詢老師的建議。當(dāng)時(shí)Z同學(xué)在香港科技大學(xué)的智能建筑物技術(shù)及管理和謝菲爾德的可持續(xù)發(fā)展建筑理學(xué)碩士這2個(gè)項(xiàng)目中猶豫不決。咨詢老師結(jié)合項(xiàng)目的具體課程設(shè)置和培養(yǎng)目標(biāo),分析<strong>港科的智能建筑物技術(shù)及管理雖然研究對(duì)象是建筑,但方向上更多是圍繞建筑的設(shè)備為主,謝菲的可持續(xù)發(fā)展建筑學(xué)是以建筑本身為主,注重設(shè)計(jì)能力</strong>,更符合Z同學(xué)的預(yù)期,最終確定了所有申請(qǐng)項(xiàng)目。</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;"><br />在給學(xué)生做時(shí)間規(guī)劃和材料清單時(shí),我詳細(xì)列好了每個(gè)學(xué)校的特殊要求,包括是否需要作品集,作品集的具體要求,推薦人是否需要職業(yè)推薦人,實(shí)習(xí)時(shí)間長短等等。另外,我還幫學(xué)生梳理好了每個(gè)時(shí)間段要做的事情。最重要的是,我用文檔把不同項(xiàng)目作品集的提交方式、提交時(shí)間、格式要求、文件大小等官網(wǎng)說明都一一羅列出來,方便Z同學(xué)參考。在11月份Z同學(xué)完成作品集后,我根據(jù)學(xué)校官網(wǎng)項(xiàng)目申請(qǐng)所需的作品集要求,與Z同學(xué)配合一起檢查確認(rèn)了不同申請(qǐng)項(xiàng)目最終的提交版本。</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">在文書素材的準(zhǔn)備上,我了解了Z同學(xué)相關(guān)的經(jīng)歷信息之后,給Z同學(xué)做了詳細(xì)的分析。Z同學(xué)GPA 82.38,成績一般,不算加分項(xiàng),且那時(shí)已經(jīng)臨近Z同學(xué)畢業(yè),此時(shí)再提高GPA和競賽背景已經(jīng)為時(shí)過晚,那么我們就把提升的重心放在了實(shí)習(xí)上。通過和Z同學(xué)的溝通,我得知他有一段甲級(jí)設(shè)計(jì)院的實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)歷,這對(duì)于申請(qǐng)是個(gè)加分項(xiàng)。<strong>建筑專業(yè)就是需要通過具體的項(xiàng)目去鍛煉制圖、設(shè)計(jì)能力的。</strong>考慮到他申請(qǐng)的20個(gè)項(xiàng)目中雖然都是建筑方向的專業(yè),但有些專業(yè)更多是偏向于城市設(shè)計(jì)與規(guī)劃的,所以我建議Z同學(xué)可以繼續(xù)在甲級(jí)設(shè)計(jì)院實(shí)習(xí),不過是調(diào)整為去城市規(guī)劃部門,這樣城市設(shè)計(jì)與規(guī)劃、建筑設(shè)計(jì)這2個(gè)方向的實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)歷都有了,兩端實(shí)習(xí)時(shí)間加在一起,也能滿足部分項(xiàng)目要求的8個(gè)月以上實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)驗(yàn)。</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">另外我還了解到,Z同學(xué)獲得過建筑谷雨杯入圍獎(jiǎng),還有一些學(xué)校小獎(jiǎng)。建筑谷雨杯雖然只是入圍獎(jiǎng),但也需要具備一定的實(shí)力和技巧,含金量還可以,也是一段給申請(qǐng)加分的履歷。所以后面在CV素材中,我們基于學(xué)生現(xiàn)有的經(jīng)歷,選取和城市規(guī)劃、建筑設(shè)計(jì)相關(guān)的含金量最高的4個(gè)科研項(xiàng)目去挖掘潤色。</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">對(duì)于實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)歷板塊,我們更多是基于項(xiàng)目來展開,通過跟進(jìn)Z同學(xué)的具體項(xiàng)目去展現(xiàn)他的制圖經(jīng)驗(yàn)與能力、設(shè)計(jì)的能力。英文的PS也結(jié)合申請(qǐng)的不同專業(yè)的偏好,又細(xì)分為了建筑和城市規(guī)劃、設(shè)計(jì)2個(gè)小方向來對(duì)素材進(jìn)行潤色寫作。</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;"><br />在11月份陸陸續(xù)續(xù)遞交完申請(qǐng)之后,Z同學(xué)收到了港大、港中文、UCL等院校的面試邀請(qǐng)。每一次面試邀請(qǐng),我們都會(huì)提供學(xué)生專業(yè)的面經(jīng)作為參考,并幫Z同學(xué)安排模擬面試。最后Z同學(xué)也是如愿斬獲了港中文、港大、UCL、港科、理工、謝菲等10個(gè)項(xiàng)目的錄取,可以說申請(qǐng)的院?;旧隙冀oZ同學(xué)發(fā)了offer。<strong>特別是UCL,它的巴特萊特建筑學(xué)院是倫敦大學(xué)學(xué)院最負(fù)盛名的學(xué)院之一,也是世界公認(rèn)的最頂尖最具影響力的建筑學(xué)院之一,被譽(yù)為世界建筑學(xué)院的最高學(xué)府,位居2023年QS世界大學(xué)排名建筑領(lǐng)域世界第一,可以說是很多建筑專業(yè)學(xué)子的夢(mèng)校了。</strong>收到這個(gè)offer,Z同學(xué)也很吃驚,十分激動(dòng)。</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">相對(duì)錄取比較坎坷的是港大的HKU Master of Science in Urban Design and Transport這個(gè)專業(yè)。當(dāng)時(shí)Z同學(xué)面試完不久就收到了港大發(fā)的郵件,表示把學(xué)生放在了waiting list上。由于Z同學(xué)表達(dá)了自己比較喜歡港大的這個(gè)項(xiàng)目,所以我寫了封love letter給學(xué)校,重點(diǎn)強(qiáng)調(diào)Z同學(xué)的能力與優(yōu)勢,想要再為Z同學(xué)爭取一把。還好不久港大就給Z同學(xué)發(fā)了正式錄取,一切努力都不算白費(fèi)。</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">至此,Z同學(xué)的申請(qǐng)季算是完美收官了?;仡欉@一路,Z同學(xué)的成功不僅在于自身的努力,大膽的選擇,還有一步一步和我們的完美配合,每個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)環(huán)環(huán)緊扣,幫助Z同學(xué)完美拿下頂尖offer。在此,我們也祝愿Z同學(xué)學(xué)業(yè)順利,夢(mèng)想成真!</p>
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